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Herd our confusion into the slow brink
of our becoming: Word, construct us
so as to writhe in the old wink
of our returning: I have a body

and it breaks, slowly and from the inside.
The tithe time takes is eternity.
Hear our confession: From the snow
our skin hides the body's blood and heat.
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i-am-a-bridgewalker Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
god fucking dammit this is beautiful.

interweaving miracles of embodiment and consciousness and their micro-cosmic war with each other, with themselves.

really really love what you do.
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:iconexistencewesummonyou:
Wow! Thank you... that's really really wonderful to hear.

The second sentence of your comment could be a poem in itself.
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i-am-a-bridgewalker Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it's hard to speak simply about something like good poetry. = )
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spearofhope Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome to see another upload from you - it's been a while. This one in particular is very insightful. I love the title in particular, how it echoes the theme of the piece.
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:iconexistencewesummonyou:
Thank you! It has been a while... I've been writing, I've just been more hesitant lately, for some reason, to post stuff online. And thanks for noticing how the title echoes the themes of the piece.
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